Reflect on the Persuasive Writing.

I learn a lot of things on the debate today and research. For example, I learn how to be better at a debater and able to see through opponent mistake and take advantage of their mistake. Second thing that I learn was how to strike the opponent mistake and knock them out. Lastly, Is that I learn was how to really team work and backup team like my teammate did. I could improve many things like write a better paragraph and make more effective speech and don’t forget what I need to say. Lastly thank to my team.

Crucible Act Three Pt. 2 Response

In Puritan culture, adult men held all of the power with women and children expected to be subservient. Through the events of the trial I think that Abigail was the one who hold all the power now. Like the way she blame Marry for being a witch while looking on the ceiling and screams,  for example “If I must answer that, I will leave and I will not come back again” (Miller 189) and the way she rise her voice in the course, for example  “If I must answer that, I will leave and I will not come back again” (Miller 189). By the evidence in the story I read so far and in my opinion of how thing work, I could tell that Abigail is the one who hold the power of how thing will work out.

Japanese Interment

When I learn about the Japanese Interment I didn’t know it would be this worse. Since the camp gather Japanese, German, Italy only, then why they also capture american born citizen and also many case were mix American. Of all reason they said the Japanese american were disloyal to america. The worse case the camp give many people sickness, bad food.

Crucible Act Three Response

In this story everybody keep lie about many stuff and all are so wicked, but in my opinion the most honorable person in all of them is John Proctor. For example he tell the court  “Who tells us Rebecca Nurse murdered seven babies by sending out her spirit on them?”(Miller 180),“The people signing it declare their good opinion of Rebecca, and my wife, and Martha Corey” (Miller 181) trying to prove all the women are arrested were innocence. Also he protect his wife and want her to be out of prison and be free by saying “These are my friends. Their wives are also accused-“(Miller 181). By those all example i can tell that he is the most Honorable man.

Crucible Act Two Pt.2 Response

The female in the play frequently accused for being and witch. As many suspected to being a witch and lie to Hale about them being a witch and confess  to be able to keep their life. But many didn’t know all of this starting from the Greedy and selfish of 1 girl Abigail. The puritan accused many people being a witch but they couldn’t even recognize  that this event was real or fake.

Crucible Act Two Response

Miller do this to show and reveal more mystery and experience to the reader. It also help the reader develop understanding of the event that happened. Also he want to show and tell everybody that what happened to the event if everybody keep lies about stuff and make it more worse. Then lead to the consequence that will neither kill them or hurt the innocence and create more conflict .


Crucible Act One Pt. 2 Response

The conflict between Abigail and Tituba make the witchcraft situation become much more worse and it give many problem later on. For example : Abigail said ” It Tituba, she make me drink it. She send her spirit to me in the church to make me laugh. She come in every night and make me drink blood. She make me dream of corruption”. Then When Hale ask Tituba she lie about everything and blame everyone she could think of.  In my opinion i don’t think that this thing could stop from this it gonna be all around to town and maybe even goes to another town as well.

Crucible Act One Response

I think John didn’t have any feeling left for Abigail, but  he still care for her., For example John said ” Abby, I may think of you softly from time to time. But I will cut off my hand before I’ll ever Touched, Abby “( Miller 1) and when Abby say “I have  a sense for heat, John, and yours has drawn me to my window, and I have seen you looking up, burning in your loneliness. Do you tell me you’ve never looked up at my window.?”. John relief ” I may have looked up”( Miller 439), But what tell me why didn’t love her anymore is that when Abigail say “Oh I marvel how such a strong man may let such a sickly wife be-“, John Yell “speak nothing of Elizabeth!”, If he didn’t love his wife, then why he being so angry and trying to depend his wife. In my opinion a man when he didn’t love his wife and getting seduce by a YOUNG MAIDEN, he might just go for it. But when she ask all kind of thing to try to get him confess his feeling, but he keep deny it and make an oath and that tell me that john he might see seductive and care for her, but he didn’t love her.


Outcast Response

In the English class today I have a chance to read one story, Author by Bret Harte name” The Outcast of Poker Flat” depicts a ragtag group of misfits trying to survive in 1850. To me I believe they were not a very successful team, because In the first place there were one members who separate himself from the team and leave on his own, that is Uncle Billy a sluice-robber and a drunkard. Beside from him most of them work very well as team because they all cooperate with each other , For example Mr.Oakhurst  create a plan to make a snow boot and they together making it. But all of that is after the arrive of the ” Innocent”, but before the “innocent” arrive they all just not cooperate  each other. The new group now stop being selfish and start sharing what they have and helping each others. But Mother Shipton Starved herself and give her meal for the younger one for little Piney and She end up passing away. Mr. Oakhurst aimed to help by sending Tom back to Poker Flat, but it all ended up to fruitless. Before Tom could return and save them Mr. Oakhurst shot himself and The Duchess and Piney, his fiancé, froze to death. They try and gain a lot of success, but to me that is fate was in their way.

Trails West in America History

Today in American history we talk about Group of people or individual moving from the middle east seek for new opportunity. For example they some move for gold because they want to be rich fast and some for new land that they can own and learn all of dangerous that all awaiting ahead for them. Then for the assignment I had to come up with the story of how my trail to the west and how I did it… Guest I had to use my imagination.

Then I shall begin my story…


On the day that we leaving ours house from west side of Mississippi river and moving toward northwest to find a new lands and seek new opportunity. Before we start ours journey, we first gather and prepare all the supplies we need for the long trip, so my mom and dad creating a list of what should we need for the journey Include Salt, Sugar, Lard, bacon, beans, coffee, belonging, rice, water, whiskey, bedroll, books, medicine, Gun powder, cookware&eating Utensils, clock, Gunpowder, tools, tent and hunting material . Then the next morning when the dawn still young we start our journey seeking for the new land and new chance, leaving our dearest behind. On the journey, we happened to meet one of the merchant who told us that there are a place far up North about 6 to 7 mouth away where not many people live and before we say good bye, the merchant said ” Be warn… that place didn’t have many people inhabitant for a reason.. and if you have a chance to meet some local people… you might want to ask for some advise. “, After finish the man finish the man wish as luck and watch us leaving instill it too far for his old eyes to see. Then after 5 mouth of traveling we experience a lot of things and learn many news, But the only that we didn’t learn is what awaiting us a head. Before we even notice the winter is already come and on that night the first snow and so far the heaviest snow i ever experience, the snow it block ours path in middle of nowhere, the road filling up with 3 foot layer of snow and it keep snow for the rest of the day after. 2 week later we run out of supplies Wagon died for survives we eat ours wagon raw and on that night the only thing that i remember is the chilling cold and sleepiness.