Narrative reflection

In my narrative, it’s about teamwork of a family on a trail leaving home. In my story a family of five leaves home to find better freedom and church. In the middle of the trail winter starts to get bad and they have to camp into a cave. In the cave overnight the snow grows about five feet and they are stuck in the cave for awhile. The Michelson family soon then run out of food and has to kill their only way out, the mules. Another week goes by and the boys are getting sick and then the father finds a way to feed them, cannibalism. In the end their teamwork does not work out and their mother has gone mad.

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